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Carole
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|  Subject: Re: Index to Daz's Poems (Our Resident Poet!!)  Sat 14 Jun 2008 - 22:18 | |
| | 14 Oct 2007, Daz wrote: | Addition and modification
New one added for the health of smokers everywhere and have altered when a whale cries on page two. I didn't think the lines ran very well each time I read it back. I think now that although shorter it is more fluid.
Love to all
Daz
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| 2 Nov 2007, Carole wrote: | Hi Daz,
Yes I think that your "When a Whale Cries" poem is much improved too. Well the original was good anyway - but I understand what you mean about it being now more fluid as you read through it. It's great Daz.
I've just added "An even playing field" and "the Drummer Boy" to your index, above. I think that's up to date now, but please will you check it? What a brilliant collection now David!! I come back to this board a lot to read through them all. My mum and dad love them too.
Hope all is going OK for you and we'll talk again soon. Luv, Cas xxx
PS; A text link now been added at the foot of every poem Topic for quick return to the Index........... >> Back to Index to Daz's Poems >>  |
| 3 Jan 2008, Carole wrote: | Hiya Daz,
Just been at your John Arnold poem - it's growing as the story develops, I see
I'm not sure if your index above is up to date, so I'll check that later this week some time Daz. But just wanted to mention about the fault with line spacing when centering text and images. It still isn't rectified, & its not just our Forum - it seems to be a problem throughout Forumotions (our hosts). They seem to be having some trouble making it right - but it will be sorted eventually. In the meantime, yes, to ensure you get the line spacing displaying correctly - for now, use the Left margin, instead of centering.
Bye for now
Cas
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| 11 Jan 2008, Carole wrote: | Daz's Poems Index above has been updated today to include:
The Meaning Of Life And Everything.
Solution Pollution.
John Arnold. (In progress).
Daz, I discovered that the back and forth links between your Index & the poems were all opening in new windows or tabs. I've corrected this now in the Index - so all just open in the same tab or window. Will check the links back to the index from each indidiviual poem over the weekend some time and correct any needed in the same way. I think has occurred since we changed to the new domain www.smithchat.com. We changed all internal links to be www.smithchat.com. But now discovered that all the internal links should be just ... http://smithchat.com .... etc. - otherwise they open new windows or tabs!! 
Don't ask me why!!?? haven't a clue! 
Chat again soon
Cas  |
| 13 Jan 2008, Daz wrote: | Hi Cas.
Sorry Iv'e not been on for a bit, it's been very busy at work.
Thanks for all the work you are doing on the poems, it's all much appreciated.
Just found Cas that if I change the font colour to brown the centre positioning works ok.
At the moment I'm writing a long one for older children on King Arthur.
I've nearly finished and will e-mail it to you for your comments.
I won't post it for the moment as I would like to see if I can get it published as a childrens book. I just need illustrations. If you feel the need to draw when you read it, that would be great..... If we're not successful then I will put it on the forum.
Will talk soon.
Lots of Love.
Daz.
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| 22 Jan 2008, Carole wrote: | Hiya Daz,
No need to apologise - We're just happy to see you here whenever you can Ooooh I'm looking forward to receiving your long King Arthur poem. Yes - I don't blame you for approaching a publisher.
As far as I can make out now - I think the centering plus line-spacing technical problem has been resolved now. But please let me know if you do have any more trouble with the formatting.
Chat again soon
Cas
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ps all the links in the index above are OK, but just working through the list and correcting the link at the bottom of each poem topic (to prevent the opening of multiple tabs or windows)... this one is a correct link.... >> Back to Index to Daz's Poems >>
Reminder for me - all corrected in the topics up to My bike ride 1962
& to be continued. 
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| 23 Jan 2008, Daz wrote: | Hi Cas.
I can't believe I have a cold again!!!! We must all keep re-infecting each other.
Shouldn't be too long with King Arthur now. You will be the first to see it and I appreciate your comments.
Talk soon.
Love Daz
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| 24 Jan 2008, Carole wrote: | Oh no!! not a cold, poor old you. Well, hope you're soon feeling better Daz. I'll do a few more of the link corrections now in your topics, whilst I'm here
Luv
Cas
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Back again - Done up to Solution Pollution. - so to be continued.
(links in blue have been corrected, any still in orange - still to be corrected) |
| 15 Apr 2008, maxine wrote: | | Daz I have added the latest of your wonderful peoms to the index |
| 16 Apr 2008, Daz wrote: | Many thanks Maxine, your a star.
Love to all.
Daz
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| 17 Apr 2008, Carole wrote: | Hiya Maxine and Daz,
Thanks for doing those updates Maxine during my absence
Daz, I'm so sorry for not having caught up with your latest poems and other input yet. Since our week on "limited access" I haven't been able to get online much because of other committments I've been having to give time to. I will be having a "big catch up" this weekend, and hope to chat with you then.
Luv Cas
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| 17 Apr 2008, Daz wrote: | Hi Cas.
Never mind Cas that's ok. As long as your well and still with us nothing else matters.
Love Daz
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| 19 May 2008, Carole wrote: | Hiya Daz,
Thanks for that nice comment, and since then I have had a few set-backs health-wise, and so have you!! But much better now, and so are you it seems - so that's good news!! Just catching up again with reading on this Literature Board & your poems. Love the new ones. Any still not linked to your index (above) will be sorted
Luv Cas
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| 14 June 2008, Carole wrote: | Hi Daz,
It's always great to read through all your brill poems, and to see new ones keep arriving here 
I've just added the most recent ones to your index above. If you or anyone notices I've missed any - I'd be grateful if you'd let me know then I'll sort it.
Daz - also I've put the Index on the Calendar for the 15th. |
With Love and  from Cas xxxx
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Carole
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| | Subject: Re: Index to Daz's Poems (Our Resident Poet!!) Sun 15 Jun 2008 - 10:40 | |
| Two newest & wonderful poems by Daz added to his Index today.
Father's Day. and When I'm Gone.
(having a tidy up on the boards, so have consolidated all previous
reply posts on this topic as above, showing dates posted )
Carole
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Carole
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| | Subject: Re: Index to Daz's Poems (Our Resident Poet!!) Mon 7 Jul 2008 - 13:03 | |
| More new poems posted recently by Daz & added to the Index above.
The most recent is Please Stay.
and it's lovely  |
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(July 2008 - Thanks Daz - its fabulous, Cas xx)
